I don't know. Judge me strictly

First off you were too relaxed and should've held some parts like the neck so you don't look too floppy. The dms were pretty good but you could've continued the replay and made it longer with some more dms. The opener is too simple you could've started off with something more creative that would give you more momentum as well. The sudden hold in the pose looks pretty weird, you could've gotten a good pose if you stayed like that at frame 195.

I disagree with what Dylan said about the floppyness and the opener, it goes nicely together imo. However I wish you would've grabbed uke's hand and his leg (at around 355) so you could have followed up your very nice kick to uke's torso with a kick to his crotch.