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Cookies, an untold autobiography
Replays, Yes I grabbed, so what


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Since when did I become Asian?
Originally Posted by JDawg View Post
Replays, Yes I grabbed, so what

BURN THE HERETIC KILL THE INFIDEL PURGE THE UNCLEAN

*Cough*

This is some serious stuff man! Very flowing and smooth, and also quite destructive!
Just what i like to see. Can't really find any flaws in any of them, so it'll be a
9/10 for them both
Top class replays mate!
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various places to find me lol
Who cares if you grab, you do it well.

The first one I really like. Very smooth and it looks 100% planned (none of my replays are, so that impresses me). I really like the opening punch and every movement after you grab leads to a nice kick DM. Good scrit. 8/10

The second one I didn't like so much. It almost looks like you missed the first few kicks and then just decided to slap a madman on the end . It is still better then a lot of replays posted here, but I liked the original better then the continuation. 6/10
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Thanks for the comments guys. Deady, I was actually just trying to be artsy in set up in the second one ... That and my inability to make use of good opportunities
Since when did I become Asian?