Toribash
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xlr84life - A New Beginning
Greetings,

I intend to start using this thread for my replays that are not parkour, still keeping "how to parkour" thread.

Ukebashing was a part of toribash I never really dwelled into, but that is about to change hopefully.

Well, my first serious replay, starting nice and easy, cnc appreciated
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xlr Twisty.rpl (129.3 KB, 90 views)
Parkour like you've never seen before:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=423045
I thought the opener was ever so slightly hold all but meh whatever.
I liked how you did that handstand thing to set up for the kick, I haven't seen that in too many replays I've watched (though granted, that isn't many) however around frame 410 when you push your right elbow out and get your left arm spinning round it seems a little bit too quick of an acceleration to me. Pretty minor though I'd say, but get a more qualified opinion on that in case I'm wrong lol.
More importantly there's a big twitch around frame 350 where you start the kick but your arms do this weird up and down motion that causes a nasty twitch in your whole body.
I didn't have a problem with the kick itself though, and the way you pushed off from that into your pose was pretty nice (and fluid), taken from your parkour no doubt eh?

All in all I liked the replay but work on the twitching.

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btw might you be able to cnc my parkour? pm me if you're interested and I'll link the thread if you don't want to find it yourself

ps that was my first try at proper cnc, could someone cnc my cnc?
Thanks, it was a good cnc, I knew that I did that up and down shoulder thingy, but I didn't think anyone would notice.

Sure I can cnc your parkour just link me.
Parkour like you've never seen before:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=423045
Nice replay ! I love how the double kick looks strong and the stance. I'm not a huge fan of your right arm's move at the end when you land in the stance.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

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Inspired by begotten, large, swexx, oblivion.
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xlr skate.rpl (339.6 KB, 38 views)
beg_skateboard_street_1.tbm (32.9 KB, 23 views)
Parkour like you've never seen before:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=423045
Sometimes you gotta learn to run before you could walk.

-30 manip

I suck at endings so I'm open to suggestions.
Attached Files
xlr Control.rpl (240.5 KB, 46 views)
Parkour like you've never seen before:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=423045
Have you tried manipulating uke a bit more at 90 instead of stopping his spin with your left hand

Going for a kick or punch on the torso or groin rather than just a decap will look better and make it far easier to transition into the pose because you don't have to worry about Uke falling on top of you

EDIT: Attatched an edit where I kinda continue the thing

It's not very good but eh, just an idea of what you could do
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a bad edit.rpl (277.0 KB, 34 views)
Last edited by DatSkip; Mar 21, 2015 at 09:27 AM.
I do some videos
Feel free to PM me for any video-related questions
I've been trying all night to get in a good position for a groin/chest boom but failed at it, I think it's also possible to continue the manip a lot more.
Nice edit though, I see a good opportunity for a groin punch as well, I'll try doing so next time I get.
Parkour like you've never seen before:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=423045