<< Gramar junkie
It all started from one simple warrior. He was a strong fighter but also an orphan.
Nobody accepted him. No one gave him a chance to prove himself.
No one listened to his cries.
Suggest the tripple dot technique. (...) Where ever you feel fit.
Start: ..._____
Middle: ...____...
End: ____...
goddess*
Make it stand out and be particularly awesome.
It's pretty solid. I suggest you might want to make the titles, clan thread, recruitment thread, etc etc..., a bit bigger. Maybe use a differnt font.
Overall, I give it an 8/10. Good job.