After 4/5 hours of streaming, Finally finished it.

Opener was super boring.
Personally, I didn't like the slowness of it, and the way you reversed.
Lifts were pretty good, although you did brush up against uke quite a bit. Boom was pretty good, although I feel like you could've gotten a 4dm boom if you really worked on it.
Decap was alright, expected you to go for a boom or something.
The grab kick and all that was pretty eh. Awkward movement, and wasted potential. Split could've been made a core for the hell of it. Double backkick could've been turned into a complete chest boom without ruining a chance for a skeet later, you can skeet anything.
Transition to the skeet was super long and boring and stiff and just overall generally bad.
Transition to the pose was good, really simple.

Tbh, it was too relaxed for my taste, I could feel the relaxing. Not that it's bad, just that in this case, it made the tori look really floppy.

Thanks for being honest
So much effort.
So, I made a re-make of that, and Got a 5dm boom at the end
Second 5dm kick I've got.
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Ooooooooup.
Just finished another replay.