Toribash
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Bitch, Imma shit...
So, it's kinda I'm back to replay making a lil...
Here is the first replay, CnC, etc, etc, etc.
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(Elate) - Overcome.rpl (202.3 KB, 69 views)
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SWAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YES
Anyways, opener was pretty simple. Some minor movement issues, awkward leg extension.
The entire spin kick was cool, generic though.
Split looked weak, really weak.
Spin to the decap was cool, looked nice and strong.
The transition to the boom was eh. Didn't like the way you completely reversed all your momentum, despite the fact that you have always really done that.
There was some awkward leg movement when you were jumping for the boom.
Boom itself was nice. Even though you didn't extend your leg, it still looked strong.
Pose was gold. No time wasted getting to it, I've always loved that.

Great to see you back, not too bad for a first start back. Especially after all that time you were gone for.
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Heh, thx, Ds. I appreciate it. Gonna comment some replays of yours soon ; ]
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Aaaaaand, that's another one I made a week ago.
Let's see what you can say about it... (if you can)
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(Elate) - Bubble Butt.rpl (198.3 KB, 45 views)
Last edited by Elate; Nov 3, 2013 at 06:49 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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The replay had a common dm pattern, but you pulled it off well. Nice flow and the hits looked powerful. I didn't enjoy the transition to the chestboom. Like dscigs said, reversing your movement after all that spinning was a bit disappointing. Good job for keeping the whole replay no-grab though.

EDIT: lol I failed, you ninja'd me with a new replay.

Bubble Butt:

I was about to say generic opener (I hate that word) because of the setup, but the contracted elbows made it look different. The hits looked fantastic, I don't even understand how you get so much power. The pose was awkward, your legs were too.. spread. lol
Last edited by eazi; Nov 3, 2013 at 06:52 AM.
(╯°□°)╯︵ pɐǝɹɥʇ ʎɐldǝɹ
Omg, thanks, eazi. Didn't even know you sticking out here :3 And yeah, I should practice more about some movements, etc...

Edit: Hehe, happens
Last edited by Elate; Nov 3, 2013 at 07:00 AM.
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Opener and spin were nothing really special. I like the whole contracted spin though.
The first kick was nice, not really any problems I saw with it.
Same thing with your second kick. However your leg twitched a bit when you setup for the second kick.
Cool pose.
No problems with dms and such, just work on your movement and cool ideas.
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Thx, Ds.
Something old and remade a lil bit.
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(EL) - Urbanity.rpl (277.1 KB, 39 views)
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Old opener and whatnot.
First boom and stuff are still nice.
The transition grab to the 2nd kick was eh, didn't really flow into the replay, was rather twitchy.
I like how you weakened the kick to leave room for the punch.
The punch was just wow. No need to say anything about it, loved it.
Transition to the pose was alright, could've been improved.
The only thing is that it's twitchy :c
Honestly, if you remade this and removed the twitchiness, p replay.
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very generic opener but the transition to the first spin was ok
the transition after that to the split was kinda bad, You looked like you got stuck alot with different parts of your body on the ground(could have looked alot smoother)
the amount of momentum you got into the first kick was nice even though I would have liked a (double)core
decap was ok but the way you up was weird because you again dragged on the ground
transition to the boom was cool and I have no idea how you got it to look so clean and powerful
gj
Have a great day, thanks for looking at this post I guess.
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