Toribash
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[Art] Quick sketch-ups
I'll be posting random crap I come up with in here and would like a bit of c&c pleeeeeeeeeease.

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nothing that special/probably wont finish him but C&C regardless if you want so I can learn for future works


2. So after a while of inactivity I started up on this:

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It's my first real try at female anatomy. The style is supposed to be a bit anime-ish.

And keep in mind this is a VEEEERRRRYY early stage and i've got quite a bit to go. So please point out any oddities/things i've missed.

I'm having a bit of trouble with the face and hair :\ Can't quite get them right so if anyone has any input on those i'd be grateful.

Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

edit: started a little bit of coloring and shading on the second

edit2:most of the coloring/shading done on the body
Last edited by Clow; Sep 9, 2011 at 04:41 PM.
2nd one is pretty nice. I'm no sketch artist and I could never do that, but like you said face and hair could use some work. Body shape is good though.
1st one:
short and skinny arms.
would pay some more attention to how the loin cloth thing wraps and how it ties together and stuff.
otherwise its pretty accurate sofar.

2nd one:
her boobies are bigger than her head :|
well actually, her head is just really small.
otherwise, again, its fine sofar
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
1st one:
short and skinny arms.
would pay some more attention to how the loin cloth thing wraps and how it ties together and stuff.
otherwise its pretty accurate sofar.

2nd one:
her boobies are bigger than her head :|
well actually, her head is just really small.
otherwise, again, its fine sofar

That's what it is!

holy shit

i was literally staring at it for half an hour trying to figure out why it looked a little off

thank you ben thank you
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started a bit of basic coloring/shading

getting the feel of things a bit

next up is trying out some different faces/hairstyles arrrggghh
Last edited by Clow; Sep 9, 2011 at 02:43 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
i still think the torso is a bit stretched.

like i you imagine her arms put down, they would barely touch her hips. when they should be mid thigh.

its either that,. or her chest and up and hips and lower are way too small.

i like the coloring and shading

as for the unfinished head. she needs a neck.