Yeah, same as the above post.
It is repetitive and doesn't really have that much that stands out. The parts that actually do stand out have no buildup, they just come and go. I guess it would maybe appeal to some people but it really is just so plain and simple at the moment. It is boring to listen at.
Keep it up though, you can't get anywhere if not, obviously :]
I would listen to music that inspired me to create music in first hand then I would almost straight out copy the music at the best extend you can, that is how I learn most things, maybe not the same for you.