Now that I can actually read what's going on, this doesn't look anything like a "pit(t)y attempt". In fact, it looks like you trying to make something big from something that isn't.
Also, learn to spell. "Pitty" is ugly.
Also, learn to spell. "Pitty" is ugly.
"Call yourself alive? I promise you you'll be deafened by dust falling on the furniture,
you'll feel your eyebrows turning to two gashes, and your shoulder blades will ache for want of wings."
you'll feel your eyebrows turning to two gashes, and your shoulder blades will ache for want of wings."
