I understand the song isn't to everyone's choice, but I was thinking more the actual content and editing.
I have improved, but I'd still like some pointers. Thanks!
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Hey, please add the name of the programs you used next time. Also, you can use the [YOUTUBE] tag to embed youtube videos, I've done that for you this time.
I randomly paused the vid and saw 2 mistakes right away: http://gyazo.com/7e647a8ebe0af6080e0e4a516bc12c12 http://gyazo.com/8c1c2f154b09104413c70c7167a628a9
depends on the software you've used, read the rules before you do anything.
Work on your keyframing, set the keyframes facing a similar way more, dont change the distance between each keyframe.
It was nice to see a happier video here, most of them are "serious" videos.
Get rid of 0:32 bottom left, /opt hud 0 then [esc] 2x.
Disable resampling, Sony Vegas: right click media > Properties > Disable Resample.
Keep the camera on the tori.