See, I like most of these effects, but masterjepo is absolutely right. You know why I don't like people using metal for Toribash videos? Because it's difficult to synchronize the action and the music, and so the video doesn’t flow well.
Of course, the choice of music is completely yours, but something more rhythmic would be much better in my eyes. (e.g. Chez's use of Andy Hunter was a good one)