You should practice syncing and camerawork a lot. I didn't like the 'dirty screen' effet thingy, it was too solid all the time. Replays were nice though IMO.
Pls, fix your "optical" adjustment layer.
Opacity -> 10-20%
Sorry for my shit English. =/
How did you get so good? How LONG did you learn to make such good videos? Cause they are amazing ;)