Hello, hug.
I have to say this is a great quality product.
Sounds like the sound quality of a song made by professionals
But like delayer, this is not my cup of tea.
I love the music. But the harsh voice and drums hides it.
I know this will alternate the genre you are producing.
But i believe it will help you improve if you have some different things to offer.
I believe having a secondary singer with a softer voice will greatly improve the whole song.
You probably already know that one of the most important parts of music is contrast.
A soprano / mezzo-soprano voice singing softly will fit perfectly in there.
And you don't need to play drums throughout the whole track
I know it did stop here and there, but holding them off for near 20 seconds will sound just about great.
You can let the listener relax for a while, when bringing it back, the track will sound even harder than before.
Besides that, everything else sounds good.
However I'm listening on a pair of earphones, so i won't be able to say anything about the mix/master
But there are some moments which the instruments sounds crazy good
The guitar at 0:50 is very pleasing.
and i like the music pause and crowd screaming at 3:07
Great work
Keep it up!