Originally Posted by
Vinyl
I think you should focus more on the composition of your picture (idk if we can say this in english), like thinking about the lines you want to show before taking the photography.
I agree with this, you have 3 interesting buildings here that could look great if captured well, the issue here is that either of the photos are quite spot on. Try to think of simplification and exclusion when taking the photography, what do I want to show with taking this image. And after you figure that out you can think about excluding everything you don't want in the image. Let me show you an example using your own photos.
Photo 1: this is probably the best one of these 3 photos, very dark and stylish, but a couple of things are in the way here, like the logo that is cut in the middle, would be better to either include the whole name of the building or leave out the name of the building depending on what you want the message to be. There is a white space on the left side of the building but not on the right, ruining the balance a bit.
Photo 2: again using the rules of simplification and exclusion. Do you really need the cars to be in the photo? do you really need the fence? what are you trying to show in this photo. Looks like the damaged concrete of the walls in this building would tell a cool story, what is the best angle to capture these features?
Photo 3: again damaged cool looking walls, but does the railing belong in this image? maybe better to exclude it? I don't know what happened to the black levels in this image, looks a bit washed out.
The fact that you are using a phone camera doesn't really matter anymore, there are many professional photographers using phone cameras. Of course you might not have all the same options as a camera with several lenses, but you can still get some sweet shots.