Originally Posted by
Glimpsed
'too short XDDD'
I don't think you people understand how much time goes into a video like this.
like 4 days
too short
thanks tyzi not actually that useless but whatever
[0:00]
Your logo looks very poorly made. It feels a little bit too "open" and the lines around your name are a bit too thin imo. Also why is the e visible across the h?
Everythings p nice
[0:06]
Your second logo thing was actually pretty cool, except I feel like it would have been better with showing something ingame. I like the tori in the background but once again your logo just isn't too interesting. Good idea but I wish it could have had something(Like maybe a shot of the tori from a different camera angle than uke in the back or something idk)
[0:07] I can't tell what happened here. The audio kinda hints towards a decap but I can't see that. Your camera during this was just kinda like fuck man
I like everything
[0:11] What the fuck happened to the camera? once again obstructing anything that I'm seeing. It looks like you're having trouble with the camera at the very end of shots. Keep it together man please
Like the transition
[0:14] Once again I really like your sync and everything, love the effects you have and how they fit the music very well, but once again the tori got super off focus in the very end even though I can see how the last few hits sync well. The particle effect is a nice idea but I don't like it. It doesn't fit with the music and looks really awkward as it doesn't fit the speed of the song either.
[0:20]
I like the last clip, however like velair said it was way too abrupt. The wiggle effect wasn't actually that bad, but it looks like much thought wasn't put into it. Put more effort into the end. You left like 3 seconds of nothing in and the audio abruptly faded out at the end. I don't like it dad stop it
Last edited by cat; Mar 21, 2016 at 07:15 AM.