Toribash
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I don't even
Gonna start off with a collab with Hattersin, 1 madman, and a boomhit.
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Pwr - Finally Rich.rpl (163.6 KB, 27 views)
PwrHattersin - Yank It.rpl (164.2 KB, 29 views)
Pwr - Money.rpl (110.5 KB, 21 views)
Decap kick for the yank it replay was beautiful (8-10).The split kick for the Money replay was even more beautiful Loved the jump (8-10) The split kick for the finally rich replay was 6-10 c: also nice replays Pwr I see you joined Obey. :P
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<[T]Oblivion> roland im ur biggest fan
Finally Rich-
I didn't like the setup. The kick was fairly nice and you got an unexpected boom out of it. The no-grab punch was cool. Chest throw was pretty useless and didn't add anything to the replay imo. Pose didn't look very nice because the glutes were too extended.

Yank it-
The manip wasn't bad, I really liked how you kept it clean. After that, you grabbed. Manips and grabs don't seem to go well together. Anyways, the decap seemed a bit slow to me. The second kick hit the pec first, slowed it down and made it weaker than it could have been. I don't like 2dm hits like that, but it was a clean hit, which I liked. The transition to the punch and the punch itself were very nice, I wasn't expecting the hip to come off, but Uke's hand hit your head, the next punch was much weaker than the first one. The butt kick was cool because it sent the glutes flying, even though it had no dms in it. I think the replay would've been better off without the leg kick at the end.

Money-
Generic opener. The split wasn't bad, 2 dm again. The transition to the next hit was slow and didn't look appealing. I would have preferred a more spinny variation of it. The decap was nice.


Overall, pretty nice replays. Try to do more interesting stuff in them and try to get more explosive hits.
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Thanks for all the CnC
Im still practicing boomhits. I was just messing aound when I got a boom out of nowhere lol. Dont forget to dl and lp me!
(and yes roland, I joined obey)

New replay, I got CnC from my clan that helped me finish it.
Attached Files
Pwr - Pursuit.rpl (174.0 KB, 17 views)
Pwr - Fast Lane.rpl (159.2 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by Pwr; Jun 5, 2013 at 05:58 AM.
Going to be kinda vague.
You're movements on both were pretty nice. Had nice amounts of flow and momentum, although you lost it at some short points. Your hits were nice on both. I liked your boom on Fast Lane, it generally flowed well with the decap.
Nice replays, they're pretty nice.
Keep making stuf.
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Ohoho, thanks Cigs <3
Fixed the pose and glitch in fast lane.
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Pwr - Fast Lane.rpl (148.1 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by Pwr; Jun 5, 2013 at 11:01 PM.
EPIC BUMP
Added tricking, low gravity madmans, and -30 madmans!
CNC IS HIGHLY APPRECIATED



Ps's:
(thanks to Joope for helping me get the decap on Fallen)
(i got lazy on the ending of most replays)
(i feel these are my best replays yet)
Attached Files
Pwr - Coolcat.rpl (202.2 KB, 23 views)
Pwr - Ash.rpl (184.5 KB, 21 views)
Pwr - Shoot .rpl (221.5 KB, 25 views)
Pwr - pr0.rpl (329.4 KB, 15 views)
Pwr - Fallen.rpl (351.6 KB, 20 views)
I am a terrible critic at toribash, since I'm awful, but:

I like all of them, 9/10 for all.

11/10 for shoot.rpl though, holy shit.
Holy crap you've improved since I last saw you. I'd like to spar you now. For all your replays I'd say 9/10. I suck ass at madman. But your madmans look like you're sparring with dismemberment. Great job!
only have time to CnC two replays so here
Opener was generic but I like dhow you turned t into a double cork
you pulled your foot back too quickly making it look less powerful
Nice second kick
your arms were stiff following up to the second punch
You should have done a skeet
pose sucked sorry


Pr0-opener was good
loved the kick but I wish you would have gotten the glute
Second kick was good but messy
Third kick was great and powerful
fourth kick was awsome
good pose

Honestly your waaay better in -9 then you are in -30
Have a great day, thanks for looking at this post I guess.
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