Soooooo, for example, you change:
When God began to create heaven and earth, and the earth then was welter and waste and darkness over the deep and God's breath hovering over the waters, God said, 'Let there be light.' and there was light
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The Triad gazed upon the welter and waste and darkness that filled the deep and all things, and the Triad concluded that this was not the way he wished it. The Triad created the heaven and earth with a word, and breathed light into the creations.
amirite?