First one has great potential, the core dms occurred at an awkward angle in my opinion, you were almost horizontal, but other than that the kick wasn't bad.
After the kick you proceeded to 'pwn' uke if you will, but you did so rather sloppily. At match frame 709 your leg phases through your arm, always avoid that. You also did one bit at a time when you could've easily had one big boom.
Cute ending. ._.
8/10.
As for the second one, the flow was great all the way through, great use of the ground to propel yourself towards uke for the sexy boom.
Only complaint is the punch came in at an awkard angle, but I'm not sure I could've done much better.
Good pose.
9/10.
Last edited by Chaco; Mar 23, 2014 at 11:02 PM.