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I made a Dubstep.
Ohai. I made a dubstep. I use FL Studio, been doing it for 3 years now. I can teach people how, via skype or msn. PM me if interested. I also can do request music.
Isolation
Gir's Obsteperous Dance
Pacman's Theme
I have 7 songs in production at the moment, 3 DnB, and 4 Dubstep. May update the thread with them later.
Isolation
Gir's Obsteperous Dance
Pacman's Theme
I have 7 songs in production at the moment, 3 DnB, and 4 Dubstep. May update the thread with them later.
first one sounds.... not good.
you use way too much reverb, the drum pattern is sloppy, and the melody is chaotic and has no real pattern. the wobble bass is used over and over with the same pattern. all in all, you used presets which i find lazy, and it is so repetitive.
second sounds better, still a lot of reverb, different synths are louder and some are quieter, it's too chaotic. the basses are not very good, a lot of it is grainy and low quality.
the intro to the 3rd was pretty cool, the drop sucked, the bass is the same generic one used by so many people, you need a more unique style.
overall, you use way too much reverb, generic basses, repetitive patterns and chaotic melodies that don't exactly make any sense.
for using fl for 3 years, you aren't that great. i'm sorry :I
i use FL as well, if you want to hear my stuff just click the top link in my sig (dialup is a good song :>)
you use way too much reverb, the drum pattern is sloppy, and the melody is chaotic and has no real pattern. the wobble bass is used over and over with the same pattern. all in all, you used presets which i find lazy, and it is so repetitive.
second sounds better, still a lot of reverb, different synths are louder and some are quieter, it's too chaotic. the basses are not very good, a lot of it is grainy and low quality.
the intro to the 3rd was pretty cool, the drop sucked, the bass is the same generic one used by so many people, you need a more unique style.
overall, you use way too much reverb, generic basses, repetitive patterns and chaotic melodies that don't exactly make any sense.
for using fl for 3 years, you aren't that great. i'm sorry :I
i use FL as well, if you want to hear my stuff just click the top link in my sig (dialup is a good song :>)
Originally Posted by SlyBash
first one sounds.... not good.
you use way too much reverb, the drum pattern is sloppy, and the melody is chaotic and has no real pattern. the wobble bass is used over and over with the same pattern. all in all, you used presets which i find lazy, and it is so repetitive.
Alright, I'll work on more structure/variety. Actually, I didn't use any presets except for the lead synth.
Originally Posted by SlyBash
second sounds better, still a lot of reverb, different synths are louder and some are quieter, it's too chaotic. the basses are not very good, a lot of it is grainy and low quality.
Alright, I'll remove the noise/ etc.
Originally Posted by SlyBash
the intro to the 3rd was pretty cool, the drop sucked, the bass is the same generic one used by so many people, you need a more unique style.
Alright, note taken.
Originally Posted by SlyBash
overall, you use way too much reverb, generic basses, repetitive patterns and chaotic melodies that don't exactly make any sense.
for using fl for 3 years, you aren't that great. i'm sorry :I
i use FL as well, if you want to hear my stuff just click the top link in my sig (dialup is a good song :>)
Alright, I'll keep that in mind. Don't apologize, you're being honest. I appreciate it greatly! I will look at your songs now. Thanks for giving me criticism on them all, and thanks for your time!
The Pacman theme is the best of those three. I don't like the drum pattern in Isolation and in Gir's obsteperous dance the song is ducking too much behind the bass. But overall the songs are ok. 
heres one of my productions if you are intrested: Yuck W.I.P.
heres one of my productions if you are intrested: Yuck W.I.P.
Snaykie#0020 GG
