Toribash
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Single Player Replay
Well, I'm still learning how to make better replays... I think I've become a little bit better.

Criticize this and give me a few tips please.
Thanks.
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The first move is good but you need to figer out how to make one blow on the next.
I have trouble doing that but I think you can pull it off.
everything else seems good.
Replay thread

Just made...

Here is kind of a "remake".
I tried to make it bit smoother... I hope I made it better and not worse :<
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After the first hit you could make a boom if you grab and kick uke.
But since you're just starting at replay making, not bad.
Keep'em comming.
Also, comment my replay thread :3
Do you really think you're in control
since you dont do this so much its pretty good
But i would say focus on placed where joints come together for some nice booms
For example if you right right between the pecs with much power it will break of the arms and head
And if you hit right on the abs it could get you another boom
Try focus on that and get much speed that will help i hope
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Originally Posted by iCo0n View Post
After the first hit you could make a boom if you grab and kick uke.
But since you're just starting at replay making, not bad.
Keep'em comming.
Also, comment my replay thread :3

I actually was trying to do it, but was a bit too hard for me to get the kick to land in a sweet spot.

Also, hai.

Originally Posted by BankHero View Post
since you dont do this so much its pretty good
But i would say focus on placed where joints come together for some nice booms
For example if you right right between the pecs with much power it will break of the arms and head
And if you hit right on the abs it could get you another boom
Try focus on that and get much speed that will help i hope

Thanks, I'll see what else I can make.
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It was pretty nice.
But it could've been improved.
You could've done another boom right after the first one.
(as I did in the replay below)
But your getting good at booming.
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