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Tinny's Trickys!
Hey There! Here i will be posting some of my tricking and flipping replays.
Please reply and criticize, Thank You.


Just got one for you today, Enjoy.
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What i've done.rpl (180.0 KB, 36 views)
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Nice momentum you used it well but it was a meh replay because most people can do backflips and pose its not to special so i will rate it a 4.5/10
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Hey guys its presunto

And if your not gonna eat you KFC by your self ill eat it with you :D
Alright thanks, Yeah i'll try to go for something a little more unique next time.
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Here is a quick Break dancing replay, its my first break dance so its not the best...
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Break Dance.rpl (277.1 KB, 28 views)
Last edited by Tinny; May 24, 2013 at 02:38 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Realism is beautiful
Tinny thats what i want to see from you that break dance was perfect you werent stiff you had great flow. You were using you're momentum really well but your pose you need to work on that so thats why im giving you a 9.5/10
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Hey guys its presunto

And if your not gonna eat you KFC by your self ill eat it with you :D
this was very stiff and akward
the actual breakdance was fine but everything else leading up to it was bad and stiff
ok pose too
Have a great day, thanks for looking at this post I guess.
cnc is an endangered resource
Thanks for the CnC, it is very appreciated.
Here is a quick jump and decap replay. Enjoy!
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Head Kick #5.rpl (148.3 KB, 17 views)
Realism is beautiful
Break Dance
That's not really breakdancing, the "air flares" were too close to the ground, and they didn't really look like air flares. Dunno if you were trying to continue the headspin with your head not touching the ground or~
Head spin was too short.
But, anyway, the kick on the decap was pretty stiff. etc.
Also, about stiffness. I know that other people who have made actual break dancing replays sometimes keep their legs held or fully extended, but it just doesn't work out. Don't have your whole body stay in one position while you click one or two joints back and forth. Relax a knee or both, lax an elbow or both, etc.

Head Kick #5
Eh, I don't favor for run openers.
The launch is too generic and mediocre, but nice job on the execution.
The transition into the kick itself gave a nice look and was smooth.
Kick was nice and easy to land.
Sort of didn't like how you didn't make this a flawless replay. It seems very easy to adjust.
Hey, its been a while. But here is another Tricking replay, Enjoy!
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Tinny-Overall.rpl (154.8 KB, 10 views)
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