Hi everyone. I will be posting my best, and possibly all, of my replays here.

Please cnc, even if they suck. which they do.





edit: GO TO LAST PAGE AND GIVE ME CNC PLEASE.

please cnc everyone, it would be really helpful.

hi i'll start you off c:

i see openers like that quite alot, pretty generic, didn't like the way you reversed your momentum a little after but the way you took off to kick with one leg to kick looked alright and the split was quick and solid

i didn't really like the whole thing you did when you were on one hand, looked like you were focusing too hard just on getting to him without considering much else, decap looked a little weird and way you went into the pose was a bit floppy

hold or extend your neck because it looks floppy and ugly if you dont

focus more on your movement and dont relax too much because it ends up looking really weird

thank you for the cnc dezrai, its appreciated alot, expecially since your the first person to

these are some replays i made a little while back, i used the same opener for because im batman as i did for chew bazooka bubblegum, in case anyone's wondering.

i really need to work on poses, so cnc on those would be helpful as well, although i dont really know what you can cnc on, since there are really no poses
in a lot of my replays.
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pretty generic.

also, i know i messed up on the grabby-leggy part towards the final kick, i did notice that.

cnc please.

I've already cnc'd some over skype with you, so I'll just cnc the ones i haven't seen yet.

Chew Bazooka Bubblegum: Weird opener, but it got some good spin, so it wasn't too bad. You should avoid positions when you're on the ground like you are at the very beginning. Your wrists were pretty floppy, as a rule, I keep neck held/contracted and my wrists held/extended. The first kick was pretty good. The second was also pretty decent, but you didn't have much power on the floor to push off from. It's usually best to keep at least one foot on the floor when punching or kicking for more power. You go from contract to extend quite a lot in this one, you should avoid this for extra fluidity. I didn't really like the pose. You know me, I like standing poses :P. Good job anyway

Space chimps was pretty meh in my opinion. The opener was really weird, and isn't really one I would expect for a typical destruction replay. It was pretty whipy too, as your arms flail a bit. The flip itself was pretty cool looking, I must admit, but the kick wasn't very well executed. It was an odd place for an attack of any kind. Nice decap anyway though.

Pretty generic: I thought the opener was cool, but I didn't like how you had your hands in the air for so long. You should probably lower them for a few frames and then switch them to relax. I'm not sure what I felt about you switching direction. It wasn't very flowy, but it was smooth at the same time. the kick was pretty good, but it was odd timing. The second kick wasn't smooth, but it got the job done. I wasn't a fan of the way you picked uke's torso up, but the kick after was good. For some reason I thought the double hand spin was cool, it added some character. Add a pose, and as always, hold your neck :]

Good job! I hope you keep posting (although I like, died on toribash).

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there really bad

Banana Splitoki: The opener was strange, and really floppy. The launch was weird, and the first kick didn't really connect with anything. I actually liked the kick where you got the split, it was very quick, and concise. The next one was cool too. You should have let go after it though. You should have added a bit more of a pose. Decent job, but not your best.

Spirit Bomb: This was was good! You curl your wrist up when you punch, I know there is more power in it this way, but I'm not a huge fan of doing this. The opener wasn't all that, because it wasn't very flashy, but the kick was good. Your launch was weird, especially because you front flipped going backward. Avoid simply extending pecs, lowering shoulders, and contracting elbows to spin. It looks too unnatural. You should also contract your ankles at all times when you're not on the ground, extending looks ugly. I would have liked to see a better landing and pose, but it wasn't too bad. Good job!

Spirit Bomb V2: Kick was good. I liked the second kick more for the damage and placement, but less for the actual looks. I'm all about the realism though. Your position afterwards was really awkward. I don't know why you threw the head lol, would have been better without you springing up back from the dead. Decent, but I liked the first one better.

Good job!

actually skywhale, i was going for kindof going for a manip in splitoki, if your wondering why that first kick looked so weird.

Splitoki & both Spirit Bombs had very decently timed and aimed kicks, so all in all you manage to score alot dismemberments which is pretty good of course.

The thing I noticed there is that it all in all looks a bit stiff and forced.
These replays show that you can definitely manage to place some pretty good kicks so I would suggest to work on some moves that mainly aim for overall smooth movement and some faster spins.

All in all that all looks very good to me already ;)

i love these. they are awesome, probably some of my favorites.

CNC please.