Sounds clean, like the drumkick and bass in this.
This is just personal references and ideas down below (:
You could try to do fade in/out basskicks or like reverted basskicks when you're going to start playing the drums again. For an example at 1:25 before the kick.
At 2:15 - add some really faded kicks at the "aaah" voice reverb effect
At 2:19 might add it aswell when you're saying P quite hard
At 0:25 (Just an idea) - Add hi-hats that fades in before you're starting to rap, when you're saying "ho ho ho ho"
Before you're starting the rap and drums again at 2:25, make something interesting to start it again, like bring the bass up an octave right after the first kick and down again real quick like you did at 1:33 and 2:52.
Chop the bass after a kick to make it sync your text in the vocals can also bring an unique feeling.
But overall, liked it, good job and keep on going!! Hope some of these ideas work for you (: