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[VID] King For A Day
Red for the cancer, red for the wealthy
Red for the drink that's mixed with suicide
Everything red
Been working on this for 5 days now
Glad it's finally done :P
Don't know what happened to the last clip. I think I did something wrong...
Some things I need to learn:
Velo
Flow
Emphasising hits clearer
Transitions
Things I've learnt how to do:
Pan/crop
Motion Track in TB
I think this is gonna be my first one min video for now. Expect a lot of short vids because I need to perfect my style.
Replays by:
Nagato9757
Osiris
Liar
Hentai
Jaker
Larfen
Gravity
Swexx
SonnyMFS
Flash
Mack
Pr0ne
Song:
Pierce The Veil - King For A Day
Software:
After Effects CC 14
MBL
RSMB
Toribash
QuickTime Player
CnC very much welcome and appreciated!
Statistics:
Time taken: ~12 Hours
Render time: 1 hour
https://youtu.be/DjHV-15aJX8
Last edited by Nagato; Mar 30, 2016 at 07:57 PM.
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I liked the beginning, then heard the screamo. im not a fan of that, just a personal preference. I liked how the movement moved with the music, but you shouldn't be so close to the players. scoot back a bit.
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Overall
The video as a whole was very nice and a definite improvement from your other... "edits". The CC wasn't too shaby, the velo is gtetting better and the vidoe in it's entirety is pretty nice. 8/10 ~IGN
The video as a whole was very nice and a definite improvement from your other... "edits". The CC wasn't too shaby, the velo is gtetting better and the vidoe in it's entirety is pretty nice. 8/10 ~IGN
Pros
-The motion tracking in the beginning was nice and you mentioned how long the video took to render in the call we was in at the time of me writing this cnc, and I give you props for sitting there for so long.
-The CC is very nice (especially for y--)
-The Velo is also very nice, however, something isn't right with it. I can't quite put my finger on it.
-I noticed the blood effect, and you explained it to me. Very easy, very nice, use it more in later edits.
-Flow is nice
Cons
-Speaking of effects, your video's effects are lacking, but that can be seen as a pro or a con, more or less effects is really up to the person viewing the video. However, in my case I dislike the lack of effects.
-I'm not saying you should make your screenpumps stronger, I'm saying you should find a way to make them more obvious.
-The hits aren't very clear throughout the video, this could be the fault of your keyframing, but I don't really have any real gripes with it.
-The effect at 0:20 is out of sync with the song.
-Your flow, however, is inconsistent
Conclusion
Everything I noticed is written there, anything not written there isn't worth noting or wasn't worth noticing. Your videos are definitely steering in the correct direction of improvement, I wish you well on your future endeavours.
Last edited by MasterTech; Mar 30, 2016 at 01:54 AM.
Great intro dude, really fit in well! When working with metal (metalcore in your case) I'd suggest going with a song that emphasize stronger riffs and that has a versatile drummer, to easier get in those velo's and, quoting, "Emphasising hits clearer". Music is personal preference though, so roll with what you want. o/
Also practice on camera placement, like Weoo put it in the post before.
Nice work dude.
Also practice on camera placement, like Weoo put it in the post before.
Nice work dude.
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