Overall
The video as a whole was very nice and a definite improvement from your other... "edits". The CC wasn't too shaby, the velo is gtetting better and the vidoe in it's entirety is pretty nice. 8/10 ~IGN
Pros
-The motion tracking in the beginning was nice and you mentioned how long the video took to render in the call we was in at the time of me writing this cnc, and I give you props for sitting there for so long.
-The CC is very nice (especially for y--)
-The Velo is also very nice, however, something isn't right with it. I can't quite put my finger on it.
-I noticed the blood effect, and you explained it to me. Very easy, very nice, use it more in later edits.
-Flow is nice
Cons
-Speaking of effects, your video's effects are lacking, but that can be seen as a pro or a con, more or less effects is really up to the person viewing the video. However, in my case I dislike the lack of effects.
-I'm not saying you should make your screenpumps stronger, I'm saying you should find a way to make them more obvious.
-The hits aren't very clear throughout the video, this could be the fault of your keyframing, but I don't really have any real gripes with it.
-The effect at 0:20 is out of sync with the song.
-Your flow, however, is inconsistent
Conclusion
Everything I noticed is written there, anything not written there isn't worth noting or wasn't worth noticing. Your videos are definitely steering in the correct direction of improvement, I wish you well on your future endeavours.
Last edited by MasterTech; Mar 30, 2016 at 01:54 AM.