well for one u are way better than i was.
K DOWN TO THE CRITISICM!!
1= i didnt rly like it when you hit uke and nothing happens.
2= the grabs were'nt a big issue but it still made the replay just slightly less appealing.My rule of thumb is this''no grabbing for more than 3 sec. and no more than 4 grabs, unless the grabs are r booms or rips''
3= didnt hav that flare like mosier or rutz has. you can fix this by adding named moves like booms, rips, splits, punches and etc...
4= i didnt like how while attacking uke you forgot to fix your positioning like how you were crawling during the last few frames.remember to watch you footing while still doing uke damage.
5= last of all speed. try using your chest and pecs to add momentum. ill teach you a little math equation bout how replays are; speed=momentum+positioning=dms= higher quality replays
so thats bout it remember to use these tips
K DOWN TO THE CRITISICM!!
1= i didnt rly like it when you hit uke and nothing happens.
2= the grabs were'nt a big issue but it still made the replay just slightly less appealing.My rule of thumb is this''no grabbing for more than 3 sec. and no more than 4 grabs, unless the grabs are r booms or rips''
3= didnt hav that flare like mosier or rutz has. you can fix this by adding named moves like booms, rips, splits, punches and etc...
4= i didnt like how while attacking uke you forgot to fix your positioning like how you were crawling during the last few frames.remember to watch you footing while still doing uke damage.
5= last of all speed. try using your chest and pecs to add momentum. ill teach you a little math equation bout how replays are; speed=momentum+positioning=dms= higher quality replays
so thats bout it remember to use these tips
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o yea forgot the rating somewhere from 7.5-8.5 . it was balanced but didnt stand out very much. and this isnt to spite you its just my opinion
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Originally Posted by RayA75
well for one u are way better than i was.
K DOWN TO THE CRITISICM!!
1= i didnt rly like it when you hit uke and nothing happens.
2= the grabs were'nt a big issue but it still made the replay just slightly less appealing.My rule of thumb is this''no grabbing for more than 3 sec. and no more than 4 grabs, unless the grabs are r booms or rips''
3= didnt hav that flare like mosier or rutz has. you can fix this by adding named moves like booms, rips, splits, punches and etc...
4= i didnt like how while attacking uke you forgot to fix your positioning like how you were crawling during the last few frames.remember to watch you footing while still doing uke damage.
5= last of all speed. try using your chest and pecs to add momentum. ill teach you a little math equation bout how replays are; speed=momentum+positioning=dms= higher quality replays
so thats bout it remember to use these tips
I bolded the parts that I found rather strange. First of all, seconds? That depends on you fps-rate. Second: Avoid grabripping, looks terrible. Always have the punch hand a fist, not a grabhand.
And that flair that Rutz and Mosier have takes a lot of practice. Just play for some time and it'll all come.
Last: More dismembers doesn't mean better replay, and momentum = speed x mass.
And I found the madman quite amusing. Not bad at all, I like it that you don't grab from the start. Keep them coming.
Thanks for the Avatar, MrAakash
