You could easily see it, it just looks like you've done that with path tool and a paintbrush, and just did some lines, it's great on the head, if all the rest was like 2px wide, it'd look tons better.
Hmm yea I think it might look better if the relationship between platinum and nova would be that the nova looked like it was going to burst out from thin gaps. At places in the set the lines look a bit too thick I guess, otherwise very nice by me :3
I don't like it. Really.
No, technically it is good.
But looks random.
Hands'\torso' sides don't mach each other.
Mirrored lines in the front of the head make it look worse.
Head's mapping isn't good too.
And eyes... And cheap\tasteless blood splatter on 'em. And seam in the front...