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[VID] Broken (WIP2)
Hi people Back again with another video!
its been a long time since Ive posted a wip I just wanted some cnc on this,
The first cork is choppy ignore I already know.
also skip to 0:11

WATCH IN 1080p

If the vid doesn't work click Here.

Song - Lund - Broken

Replays By - Me And rcnerf(habu), (Collab)

Prorgrams used -

Adobe After Effects CC

Open Broadcast Software

Toribash

Handbrake


Enjoy! CnC Please!

Channel - ok
We need to stop using that intro, the rotation is disgusting

The sync seems a little off, it was there sometimes and at other times it doesn't even look like you tried. Also, you don't have to use the song from the start. A 12 second intro with nothing but blackscreen seems waay too long to me. Like, there was 7 seconds of actual editing there and the rest was black screen or shitty motion graphics.

Sorry if I come across as too harsh.
Glimpsed
ye stop using the intro

habu is making one

work on velo and screen pumps. These two are really ugly

and stop posting wips for god's sake
Last edited by Nagato; May 18, 2016 at 11:19 PM.
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DO NOT post wips or "Scrap or keep" shit to the art board. Keep it unlisted, if you want people to see a wip, post it on the eP thread.
Your velo: From what I can see, it's just time remap on the point, and then you do the graph editor curve.
Your p/c: Atrocious, make them pump out longer and pump in quicker. Look for a youtube guide on how to use graph editor to improve your pumps.
Your CC: It's too saturated for the song.
Your keyframing: It doesn't move enough, make it move left, right, rotate. It's quite broing to just see it in the same place - more or less - following tori.