DO NOT post wips or "Scrap or keep" shit to the art board. Keep it unlisted, if you want people to see a wip, post it on the eP thread.
Your velo: From what I can see, it's just time remap on the point, and then you do the graph editor curve.
Your p/c: Atrocious, make them pump out longer and pump in quicker. Look for a youtube guide on how to use graph editor to improve your pumps.
Your CC: It's too saturated for the song.
Your keyframing: It doesn't move enough, make it move left, right, rotate. It's quite broing to just see it in the same place - more or less - following tori.