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[VID]My first one
My first actual toribash edit
Please cnc
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Last edited by Arthur; May 20, 2014 at 05:07 PM.
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My Cnc:
1. Negative: A couple of the shaders you used, did not go with anything.
How to Improve: Try to pick a mood, or theme for the video.
Vintage- Brown/goldish filters, not too bright shaders.
Darkish/Calm- Dark Shaders, etc.
2. Positive: Camera work could improve a bit at some points. Always use free cam, by hitting the number 2 on your keyboard. It looked a bit like the circling default camera.
How to improve- Don't stop and go another direction a lot, don't keyframe too many times or it will be choppy.
3. Negative: There is little or no Sync, this is a harder song to sync to, but syncing hits and motions to the beats of music, keeps the video interesting, so try to work on picking a good song to sync to (trap, dubstep, rap) and syncing it. Nice song, but probably not good to use in this type of edit
4. Effects: Dont spam slow motion. The video was a bit slow. Speed up, and slow motion at critical, cool, awesome, hits/moves is a popular effect try it out, your transitions were pretty bad aswell, just fade into the next replay. (at at the end, fade out)
Tips:
Turns bruises off on everything in the video. (/opt bruise 0)
Only have blood on in a madman replay. In everything else (parkour, sparring, tricking) turn off (Madman = uke destroyed replay)
Over all 5.5/10, It wasn't that bad for a first edit, you're staring off well Keep practicing your editing, and camera work.
1. Negative: A couple of the shaders you used, did not go with anything.
How to Improve: Try to pick a mood, or theme for the video.
Vintage- Brown/goldish filters, not too bright shaders.
Darkish/Calm- Dark Shaders, etc.
2. Positive: Camera work could improve a bit at some points. Always use free cam, by hitting the number 2 on your keyboard. It looked a bit like the circling default camera.
How to improve- Don't stop and go another direction a lot, don't keyframe too many times or it will be choppy.
3. Negative: There is little or no Sync, this is a harder song to sync to, but syncing hits and motions to the beats of music, keeps the video interesting, so try to work on picking a good song to sync to (trap, dubstep, rap) and syncing it. Nice song, but probably not good to use in this type of edit
4. Effects: Dont spam slow motion. The video was a bit slow. Speed up, and slow motion at critical, cool, awesome, hits/moves is a popular effect try it out, your transitions were pretty bad aswell, just fade into the next replay. (at at the end, fade out)
Tips:
Turns bruises off on everything in the video. (/opt bruise 0)
Only have blood on in a madman replay. In everything else (parkour, sparring, tricking) turn off (Madman = uke destroyed replay)
Over all 5.5/10, It wasn't that bad for a first edit, you're staring off well Keep practicing your editing, and camera work.
Last edited by matarika; May 17, 2014 at 10:07 PM.
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Originally Posted by matarika
My Cnc:
1. Negative: A couple of the shaders you used, did not go with anything.
How to Improve: Try to pick a mood, or theme for the video.
Vintage- Brown/goldish filters, not too bright shaders.
Darkish/Calm- Dark Shaders, etc.
2. Positive: Camera work could improve a bit at some points. Always use free cam, by hitting the number 2 on your keyboard. It looked a bit like the circling default camera.
How to improve- Don't stop and go another direction a lot, don't keyframe too many times or it will be choppy.
3. Negative: There is little or no Sync, this is a harder song to sync to, but syncing hits and motions to the beats of music, keeps the video interesting, so try to work on picking a good song to sync to (trap, dubstep, rap) and syncing it. Nice song, but probably not good to use in this type of edit
4. Effects: Dont spam slow motion. The video was a bit slow. Speed up, and slow motion at critical, cool, awesome, hits/moves is a popular effect try it out, your transitions were pretty bad aswell, just fade into the next replay. (at at the end, fade out)
Tips:
Turns bruises off on everything in the video. (/opt bruise 0)
Only have blood on in a madman replay. In everything else (parkour, sparring, tricking) turn off (Madman = uke destroyed replay)
Over all 5.5/10, It wasn't that bad for a first edit, you're staring off well Keep practicing your editing, and camera work.
Thank you for the cnc
I will work a lot on the editing and syncing. I hope my next video will be much better
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I'm making a new video i just want to know would this be better?
I tried to sync the beats with wobbly effect
ps. that replay is one i just in the first video so don't get mad about shaders and shit :3
Last edited by NinoRossii; May 18, 2014 at 02:00 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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