Personally, I think that the kick is a bit weak, but I guess that's more some kind of personal preference.
Beside of that, the vocals fit quite well, maybe a part without vocals would be nice tho, but I guess that's going to happen anyways if you are adding a guitar solo
(Which is quite a nice idea, btw; I think a guitar solo could fit there really well)
I also noticed some kind of distortion from 1:29 - 1:58, which sounds a bit weird.
Overall I really like the song tho
(Oh and btw, your link doesn't work as it links to
https://soundcloud.com/hindsightseeing/lazerfeel )