Originally Posted by Slycooper

im not going to spend my time making criticism for something that you spent no time on
every video you post, we tell you to put more time into them and make them longer, but nothing ever changes, i dont get why you're bumping the thread when you'll just say "too lazy to make it longer cba" when thats the only useful criticism you'll receive until you do something about it

Originally Posted by uhm

this again.
also having sound effects for each gun but an auto is sort of an annoying inconsistency.

this looks really really really similar to your last one, why not just make the last one longer?

Originally Posted by Slycooper

would be nice if you finished one of these that had a proper ending or some sort of outro, seeing as thats an important part of an edit
red effect at 0:03 was cool
run cine at 0:10 was nice

Originally Posted by Darkonix

well it was an improvement..

I can see what your shooting for the first 2 clips

then that last clip again seems like u just threw in there because i cant see what your shooting at even though the +5 did show it was blended to well to notice on the first time watching it

its getting better tho.. and make something longer still ;p

Originally Posted by Glimpsed

That velo on the running cine was really nice, I would have never thought to reverse it there but you made it work. You have shown that you are capable of making really good edits, but I think that you could easily make an edit that's about 30 seconds long in the time it takes you to make two of these.

Originally Posted by Virus

I'm not sure about the lighting in the video, it's too bright. Also, the fast transitioning is a little bit weird. Other than that, it does look nice.

Originally Posted by Velair

also half speed :