Here we go.
The intro was cool, would be even cooler if it had brought something more with it, maybe if it was animated or something of the sort. I know you're creative with those, so I'll let your do your thang. The sync was on point, no complaints there, you could've made the sync stand out a little more though. The CC was obviously good, huehuehueehuuuuu. The camerawork felt a bit 'unpolished' - I don't know if you can understand but it basically wasn't in the action at times and felt a bit far from the actual toris.
Keep doing shorter videos for practice and then try making longer ones.