Toribash
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Craptastic decap kick
It took editing to make the head fly off, and there was a lot of collateral(spellcheck pl0x) damage.



Please don't flame.
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!!O...kay.rpl (68.2 KB, 26 views)
yeah that was ok
not craptastic
but maybe a little more limp
and grabby hands are newbish
make a non grabby like this one below
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How's this? I know it's not a decap but...well...it's neater.

Err, in the begining, that is.
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!!!!!!!Tribute cheecheeV2.rpl (60.2 KB, 11 views)
ur still not laxed...if ur not using the joint lax it...
experiment
were u trying to do a self leg dismember on that one....like the one i have below
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000000000000000gaylegbreak.rpl (27.5 KB, 9 views)
Originally Posted by jakebb44 View Post
and grabby hands are newbish

I want to kill you right now. Badly.

Anyways, it was a pretty cool decap, but it was stiff as hell. Like jakebb said, you
should try relaxing your joints, to get rid of the stiffness. Other things to work
on would be to use more joints at a time, so you can get more force behind your
attacks. And forceful attacks generally look better than weak attacks. Not saying
that this was downright weak, of course, it could just have been more powerful.
Also, work on your intro. We'd rather see a smooth dance than an obscenely stiff statue
wiggling from side to side =P (No offence)
Overall good, but needs more work.
And while the second replay is different, the same points apply, sort of.
The start is better, but still needs moar relax.
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