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HiVoltage's Pythagorus rap (done for school)
So ya wanna find the distance of line AC,
but you know that all you got is AB an BC,
If you know that angle B is 90 degrees,
findin that distance is easy, you’ll see.
Imma tell you how, so don’t get tense,
all you need is your head, an a little bit o’ sense.
You’re gonna hafta use a good friend o’ mine,
so sit back an’ lemme tell ya ‘bout the Pythagorus rhyme.

Take AB and square it, do the same with BC.
Add ‘em together, find somethin’ special, you’ll see.
‘cuz when you take that total, and find it’s root,
then you’ve got you’re answer, ain’t that astute.
This guy Pythagorus, he was real smart,
He invented this theorem and took it to heart.
Now this guys name is known in classrooms all round,
And I’m here to help you understand what he found.

So remember…
a squared plus b squared is c squared, be prepared; don’t be scared cuz I shared this with you.
Yeah I cared and I shared and I dared and declared this for all of these people so now you know too.
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Heh, that's actually pretty good considering it's for school. When you're looking for a beat, you might want to take a lesson from this man, one of the oldest of the old-school.

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Pretty basic. I hate rap, it's just words that happen to rhyme tied together with a beat- try making it flow a little better, some of the syballism is off and doesn't really fit.

Also, it's Pythagoras, not Pythagorus.
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Originally Posted by Oyster View Post
Pretty basic. I hate rap, it's just words that happen to rhyme tied together with a beat- try making it flow a little better, some of the syballism is off and doesn't really fit.

Also, it's Pythagoras, not Pythagorus.

The hell is a syballism?