Toribash
Start - You had a nice flow going throughout the replay and you were never stiff. Although you only got 1 2dm hit and the rest were 1 dm hits. Also you had to use grabby hands alot to get the dms. The pose was ackward looking at the end.

Over all 5/10
Hi Dark , the edited verion is better, but on that second kick try aiming more to the middle for more dm's, and try making your pose less stiff looking.
Overall 8/10
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