Alright it's gonna be kinda hard to cnc this replay because of what your doing but let me give it a shot.
The opener was too wiggly I would say.
Alright the second kick you did was cool. I liked how you kicked him however. The kick that goes to the top I wish you could focus on hitting more there. Try to aim your kicks more.
The grab dm didn't look very good to me. I really don't like grab dms I think they just look bad :/. But you grabbed again so you can do a smash. But that smash ant that good to me because you only dmed the arm. When you went to dm the leg....I didn't think it was that necessary.
I didn't like the pose. 3/10 Try not to be so wobbly.