The opener was waaaay too slow for me to like it.
Around 320 you lost fluidity and the jump just looked bad.
The cork wasn't that bad, I like how you were really close to uke but you over contracted the hip for the launch.
Your knees over lapped because your glutes were contracted the whole time also.
I also didn't like the landing how you extended the hip... It just looked weird with the contracted knee.
The kicks are pretty cool and quick but then you lowered the right arm too much on the second kick and sort of ruined it.
Tbh I wasn't too impressed with the replay overall, you still have alot more to do if you want to improve yourself.