What should I try to improve on if I want a chance to get in?

Replay making.
Nah srsly, your speed is ok, style is ok, brutality is ok, but you are kinda twitchy and therefore have bad fluidity. Work on flow.

thanks, Captain Obvious.

You aren't even in and you're already being a dick. That should help your chances loads.

Nice going, klan8.

DeeJay has a point, come back with better replays, bishop1. I'm sure he didn't say that to be mean to you. Be patient and don't reapply tomorrow or something unless you really think you've improved enough to make us think again. It's not imperative, it's just a tip

Actually, try highlighting my post.

Well I got rejected last time. I decided to try again coz getting in here would mean alot.
There is one replay that is the same as last time.
The cheezburger one is the worst.

Gj DeeJayy.
Well I viewed klan8 and bishop1's replays.
Klan8's are ok, very average tho.
Bishop's are the same. But I find his replays better

Ok, dick wants join again.
First and third you saw already.

cowmeat: The second replay was sweet. Overall, you're a tad stiff but I'd say just ORMO material. But I'm not 100% on the ordeal, so if another recruiter approves, I'd say you're in.

klan8: Those were very good, especially the last one. I loved the slow spin. You're in.