Your opener was... interesting. I really liked that punch at the end. Very nice. 8/10

first kick was stiff and ugly, second had little bit stiffnes too but third was pretty good 4/10 overall

I didn't think my first two kicks were stiff... ;_; You mean the arms? I think you can see a bit of stiffness in the arms during the first two kicks... I think.

I have nothing to critique. It's amazing. 10/10

it somehow looks grab ugly and slow loved the boom though
7.5/10

That first kick is amazing. It practically phases right through. So cool. Couldn't you get the cock block out though? D: The following boom to the chest area is also epic. It practically phased also. :P Good flow, and the like. 9/10 Because of that cock block.

That was pretty awesome. The last hit could have used some more dismemberments. Other then that it's sweet. 8/10

Niceone Splinter. You did some awsome boomhit especially the last one. Really smooth and fast. If i have to find a flaw, i didn't like so much the part when you hit uke with the upper part.

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I've tryed to do something different.

Pretty neat. I didn't like the knee DM, but the rest was really smooth - 8/10.

I didn't like the opener at all. Although a bit messy, I liked the boom punch and the kick skeet. 7/10

Btw, Spry, I can't get any more dms on it. ;_; I worked my ass off just to get that one dm.

Grabby arm DM at the start was a bit cheap, and I was expecting a core on the second kick. It still flowed nicely and the decap was good. The skeet thing was very well-aimed - 8/10.