Between 0:25 and 0:50 you kind of mixed it up too much.
At 1:21 it seems as if a whole new song had started.
As for the drop.It was crisp, It seemed right as it was about to get really dirty the base just left, then opened up again.
A little disenchanting but it was still outstanding for one of your first works
Starting from 1:50 and going to like 2:04 you could have just kept that going and faded it out, adding another ending was confusing.
I'd still give it a 8/10
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