Yo apple im seeing the improvement, but maybe you should talk to the tricking ppl for help with movement and tricks. Maybe even try asking the guys who SP in the clan for a lil advice if they are willing to assist, if not ask ORMO ppl. You are very twitchy in your replays, and movement needs improvement.
I can tell your excited to be banging out replays left and right now that your enjoying it, and seeing your vast improvement with your own eyes, but from one novice to another at making replays... Spend more time on them. WAYYYYY more time, you will notice a lot of kinks in your replays and looking at the replay section in the forum will open your eyes to your mistakes, ideas for your own replays, and other methods of becoming a better tricker my friend.
Other than this long as post goodjob dogg!