yo, i like this alot man
the first 200 frames were a little uninteresting, the movement was okay but i wasn't too much of a fan of just watching you spin kinda slowly for 200 frames, but maybe that's just my personal preference and i'm getting bored of moments in replays with no contact, idk
beginning of the manip was really dope, the combination of your right arm and leg lifting at the same time looked nice
the way you used the left arm right after was nice too
the lift with your right arm at frame 200 was really nice, great mix of keeping your own flow whilst making uke spin more
i'm not really a fan of headhits, and i saw you grabbed your left hand at frame 121, so overall i'm not too sure about everything around frame 120, it feels like you wanted to get some spin on uke with your arms but stopped and decided to heli kick halfway through
the heli kick part of the manip was fucking sick though, looked really nice
honestly i'd continue as it is, there are a few twitches and things i feel don't look too nice throughout (your right hand at frame 161 and the sudden lowering of your left shoulder at frame 160 as well as a few more) but overall i really like this and i don't think the headhit takes away from the replay too much compared to the heli kick manip
also zock, it'd be super neat if you specified why you'd remake it and pointed out what you see wrong with that area of the replay
makes for more quality c&c and stuff
but ya i think this is nice, continue from where you left off imo