Well looks like I have no chance of winning now.

Bowling for Soup:

the decap was ok, could've been better I think

the kick pushed you away from uke, and the way you got back wasn't that good

the kicks and stuff after that were awesome, I would've never gotten that many dms

9.5/11

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more manips!

This was something.

still need to work on your manips, but its getting a lot better. Sometimes you have a limb extended too much, or just look a bit awkward in general when going for those manip hits. You lose a lot of momentum that way, try and keep everything moving in one direction it makes manips a lot easier.

didn't like the kick tbh felt weak, ground dms are ok but not my ideal way to dm if I can help it. Just preference though.

Keep working at it dude!


Here's a little research project I did ;D

Every pose I do in this replay is a legit pose keep in mind. sorrynotsorry

jingles,now im pretty sure you are master at those replays,LOOOL,great realism,but sometimes(mostly when jumping) you got looking like a monkey(rotating too much).
but i laughted alot at that
saxy replay

W.I.P

bromiu:
the opener got good,pretty fluid/smooth,but when you did a small-flip,you got a bit rigid in the next moves.but it looks a great opener for the kick.
hope you finish it

i will edit the last hit as well
thx for the cnc :^]

http://forum.toribash.com/showpost.p...&postcount=268

Pow Pow

pOw PoW:

opener was a bit wierd at times and I don't like how your arm ghosted

the kick didn't get any dms :9 couldve gotten a split

kick to the glute was nice, could've gottem the crotch out though

boom was cool, could've been better though

idc about pose

8.5/10

your getting better my fried chicken friend

i can only decap.....halpmepls