RayWill135:
The opener was really strange, but its pretty unique.
When you manip uke he looks really heavy which is not the goal. He looks (and probably feels) really heavy because you are moving him straight up, fighting against gravity which is hard.
Dm combo at the end was sexy, really good job for your first manip
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Skizzify: Bro this org is all about helpin' a brotha out, you can't just skip cnc'ing a bud's replay :/
Boom boom pow: Nice hits, you really have improved since the last I saw you. You had some pretty bad replays on your first page hahaha, but now you're lookin' mighty fine.
Deconstruction: This was was ok, I kinda didn't like it to be honest. Really spazzy movements and gestures, even though the dm's were good I felt things were off.
also here is something I made