banners of JollyRoger.
I am making it and need serious critcism

You should probably add the full clan name. One part of it doesn't say much and can be confusing. Think about making it clear what clan it is as well as making it look pretty, etc.
There's a reason commercials have the full name of the product, Usually.

sup ;0

Woah Ezeth that looks really nice. Really digging the colors and lineart.

https://vimeo.com/68007815

I'm not sure how to add the Vimeo video in here..
It's for a school project and the music will probably change.
Took me 25 hours to render in C4D and an hour in AE.

so preeeetty

wow, so goood!

so shiney
nice flow and contrast