I say NO
You don't have much flow, and you become stiff sometimes. Some of your hits don't look very realistic. I dunno why, but your movements annoy me :| I can't point out why. Sometimes you extend a knee or an elbow and then suddenly contract it. I "hate" that. You don't have a lot of style when you spar, and I think that you just go for ugly looking hits and try to win most of the time. If not, then, I don't like your type of sparring style.
As already said, No, sorry.