Endurance Onslaught 6.0
I'm digging the colors quite a lot in this piece.

The shape of the face is nice, but some of the proportions are off. It seems to oblong, or high, like it was stretched. The small pupils make the eyes seem huge, so you should try to balance out the pupil size with the total eye size.

The nose seems a bit flat, this could be a shading error though, with noses, especially feminine noses, the bridge could curve and go further out at the tip of the nose, from the angle she's at, you should see more of this.
Everything else looks decent.

My biggest complaint is probably the eyes, which you could easily fix wit ha bit of painting over.
Done with this community, you guys suck.
Add shadows right, the horns looks so odd.

You can work a bit better with gradients,
try from different angles or use a fuzzy brush on the corners that are selected with selection tool.

The glow is unreal, try harder.

This is your mouse style.
bottom of neck and top of head and the background are not up to the standard of the rest ;L

I'm not sure that the lighting is quite right, but it has a nice luminous quality.

Good work Ezeth
There's a really sharp part in the neck that I can't stop staring at. Rest looks good imo
Last edited by Slycooper; Mar 20, 2013 at 06:54 PM.
A tutorial work I need to finish.
Lines are not complete, I will probably made a line art tutorial first..

preview

Last edited by dengue; Apr 2, 2013 at 09:16 PM.