I don't really understand gfx much, so my comment would be mostly subjective
Bagian kanan terlalu sepi, render garing, gak nyatu sama background
coba kan sasukenya sebelahnya lagi sharingan (blablablawtfnarutostuff) bagian kanannya coba dikasih efek kayak sharingan-nya
Glow belakangnya rada blur, biasanya kalo ane liat gfx-gfx, fractalsnya hd
Font is... eh, ok
Don't look at my edited post you stalker