Unfortunately, no, I don't like it. But I myself can't judge without the other recruiters.

As for Sprytryne, I think he needs a bit more improvement.

huh probably splinter is busy or needs more time to judge, guys don'trepeatly ask for his judgement.

Yeah, you have to be patient. Nagging will only annoy people.

<3

Koven: no
Sprytnyne: no
Kingdrake: no but pretty impressive

oh well at least I tryied, cya

well thanks anyways so cya

See ya guys, thanks for applying ^^

Also, feel free to reapply when you feel like you have improved in your replay making.

I'm here to apply again, even though I won't be accepted, I would like to know what I need to improve on.

Some sort of boom hits: Explanatory by the title. :P About 2 boom hits.

Skeet Comp: Used it for a recent competition, I'm not quite familiar with doing skeet replay's yet, or what they look like, so this is probably considered another boomhit.

Madman/Madness: A decent, quick madman.

I see great improvement from the last time you applied. The first one was pretty good, though grab booms are a no-no. No more of those please.

The second one wasn't a skeet, at all. But that doesn't negate the fact that it was pretty neat. Nice job. But the grab DM decap... was bad.

The last one was grabby :/
I didn't like it, it flowed pretty well but it was too grabby for my tastes.

I have to say that you need to improve on less grab.

Might you be looking for something like these?

Note: The only time I grab is when I 'attempt' to manipulate uke.