not sure what I was doing with this one..

Faint, you seem to look a bit choppy because the kinda unnatural looking extending/contracting. But the dm's are pretty sick

Tsneak, you got the right idea but work on fluidty and more relaxed joints

Also, here's another short little thingthing I made. It looks a little awkward though

Working on this, thoughts?

Welp workin on the spin style (what I'm gonna call it now). This is my second replay using it and it was decent. I see some twitches here and there but eh.

Spin was nice, but the first kick seemed kinda weak. The second kick was very nice but I think you should work with it more and try to get a boom.

Update on what I posted before this:

Tsneak15; The first kick was pretty weak. You look pretty twitchy throughout the opener moving toward the first kick. On the next kick the move stasis was pretty thorough until the twitching into the kick. Try to see if you can reach into the chest for a boom.

Rawwrh; Nothing much to say about it. It looks rushed. Very rushed. While saying that, I mean sloppy.

Made an opener a while ago, using the same opener as Tsneak. Quite choppy, but eh.
Tsneak: Not bad, but i reckon if you work on the last kick a little, you can pull off a boom.

Dammit faint

Stop being better than me ;.;

KHIEM YOU HAVE ACHIEVED SOMETHING TODAY
nice replay tho C:

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