Decap: Well, your movement is reaaaally stiff, try to do something about it. the pose you did before the decap looks wierd. I kinda dont feel the decap.pose was meh. Meh WIP
here
splitcap: I dont like the elbow DM, it just seems like you were going for a grab and got that DM just out of the random. The split was good i guess. Hook decap was nice. You did a lot of shit before you got to the pose, which aint good.
Abbysall pls: well then. YOu could have gone for a split, or just dont have the kick there. arm dm nice. Again, you do a kick that doesnt nothing. another arm down, ok. random shit happens. Decap was nice. the final rip was ok I guess. Good pose
mainly
spins and splits and guns and roses: relaxing uke and taking a while to get to him? bad cookeh, bad. split was alright. The second kick could have been a crotch block kick, would have looked nicer. I guess its something for a WIP, but pls dont take so long before you get to uke
because it looks bad
Last edited by duck; Apr 29, 2014 at 04:24 PM.